Supremacy
-Different types of shots: Mid shot, close up and long shot shows variety
-Almost appears to be a glamour magazine
-The shots taken are too posed for a muasic magazine, they need to be more relaxed
-Some pictures look like they were taken on a phone-blurry, crammed into one side of the photo
-No cropping or editing use as the pictures still have red eye
-Spelling mistakes
-She tried to make herself look more model like but failed
-The layouts are good but could of made some pictures bigger and strap lines smaller
-The article is clear to read
-The style of font and the colours used complement each other and the style of the magazine well
-Level 4, 52 marks
-Exam mark, 58
Drowned Insound
-Too posed photos
-Used both Mid and close up shots
-Could of got rid of the background to make image stand out more
-Smiley face in the corner?
-Yellow colour a bit tacky, although it is carried through to keep a theme, the pink used in the pages also clashes with the yellow
-The setting is good but boring
-Has resized and cropped the images
-The layouting is good but the colour scheme lets it down alot
-Font sizes- headers need to be made bigger
-Level3, 44 marks
-Exam mark, 52
Punky R
-Boxes with image in it looks good
-Variety of different shots although they are repeated alot
-The colour scheme is good
-Could misinterpret the gender of the cover model due to editing
-Name of the person, should it be called Shiggy??
-Needs a prop or images of other bands to break it up and make it different
-No barcode or price or issue no. or tagline
-No setting
-Editing is OK, changed background and the styling
-Article- short and basic
-Spelling Mistakes
-Layout is good
-More on the contents page?
-Level 2, mark 26
-Exam mark, 22
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