Progress

For this top magazine cover I have shrunk the text to make it smaller and resized the barcode. I have added a price and issue number for clarity. I have added more text at the bottom to make it seem more music styled magazine. i have changed the colouring of the header and the blue text to make it stand out a bit more. I have enhanced the eyes abit more and contrasted them with the background.  I have added in the names of the girls int he band on the front cover to allow the reader to identify the person on the front. I still think that there is something wrong with the cover, i believe that there is too much text at the bottom of the screen. This is making the magazine look more book like rather than a magazine that is fun and easy to read.  

I have changed the bottom of the page so there is less text and that the writing sits furthur down on the page. this then emphasises the eyes and the face which was the original intention. It appears to change the colours for all of the page and especially the tones on her face.